Kia ora, My name is Ruaidhri,
and I am from parkview parua school.
Me and my classmates are doing detailed recount writing
The success criteria is to put in seven senses and we put in a different color for each sense.
We are all picking out of three things to write about.
We picked out of three things
GoPro
- Fireworks
- Slacklining
- Surfing
and I am from parkview parua school.
Me and my classmates are doing detailed recount writing
The success criteria is to put in seven senses and we put in a different color for each sense.
We are all picking out of three things to write about.
We picked out of three things
GoPro
- Fireworks
- Slacklining
- Surfing
I am doing the fireworks because they looked really nice in the video.
The people were waiting for the fireworks celebrating.
Then it started.
So first the pink and purple fireworks went. Second the blue ones went. Third the fireworks looked like a starry night sky with shooting stars. Fourthly then it looked like an explosion of colors.
Then I felt like I was about to explode. I was so dizzy, but I needed to see the rest.
I thought it was so amazing.
I smelt fireworks. And I heard everyone cheering.
I was cheering with the crowd. It was an amazing time.
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