Wednesday, October 31, 2018
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Hey Ruaidhri,
ReplyDeleteYour poem is very heartwarming and has lots of great descriptive words. I remember when we all did those poems but yours is amazing! Maybe make the font of "Mum" easier to read as it is a bit hard to read. I love all the poems I have read on your blog and I'm excited for what the future beholds.
- Trinity
Hola Ruaidhri im Aaliyah from parkview parua school. i loved your poem it was a very special poem and its dedicate to your mum thats realy sweet. I like it how there was a butterfly for the background. Nice work!
ReplyDeleteAaliyah.